THE TRANSITION

**southiecook** · 6th December 2006, 07:06 PM

Originally Posted by Shakthiprabha

and then? :P

(good one s.c, however its lil tough to believe someone can open up before a GANG OF TOTAL strangers

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waiting for the next.

SP, Thank you very much for reading through and comments.

yep, waiting for the next ...

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**sipi** · 6th December 2006, 07:16 PM

Originally Posted by Shakthiprabha

ah sipi

GREAT PPL THINK ALIKE

please, dont compare shakthi, the great with an ordinary one...

endha story padichalum, adhulaiye muzhugiduven... naan andha maadhiri oru situation la eppadi nadandhupennu yosichine varuven... adhan, appadi thoninadhu... naanum life-il azhudhu iruken, but namma mela unmaiya akkarai irukuravanga, sentimental touchinga pesum bodhu...

**sipi** · 6th December 2006, 07:20 PM

Originally Posted by southiecook

I really thank you Sipi, for your comments..First para is just a reflection of the feelings of extremely desperate Jeeva, who was thinking about running away from life...
Yeah, let us wait for the following parts...

why thanks, southiecook? commenting is an easy way compare to a creation of a story...

**southiecook** · 7th December 2006, 10:23 AM

Part 2 has been posted..

**Wibha** · 7th December 2006, 01:35 PM

SC akka going well

**crazy** · 7th December 2006, 04:04 PM

where is part 2??????

**ramky** · 7th December 2006, 04:22 PM

Southiecook : nice going, with an easy flow of writing. Jeeva the protagonist has certainly aroused my curiousity, also the as yet unknown character Kiran. wonder what will happen in part 3 ?!

Vaasi : Part 2 is posted just below part 1 in the same post

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